Illumination
Inspiration:
"Proud to Be" By Marias Ideas
Mummy:
Click, click, click. “Over here sir” The photographers just
couldn’t get enough of him. Since the surprise success of his first movie, he
had been reveling in the attention that sudden fame had brought with it. They
slowly walked the plush red carpet, stopping to pose every few paces. With every
step his shoulders pulled back a little further, his head a little higher. He
was positively strutting. The grey
streaks in his hair gleamed silver in the flashes and his normally green eyes
were oily deep black pools, matching his black tails. The cobalt blue velvet of
his vest seemed like downy feathers and she could barely restrain herself from
reaching out and touching it in amazement. So unlike anything he would have
worn previously. He looked radiant in his finery, his proud headdress fittingly
exotic for a masquerade ball. He raised his feathered mask to his face, and she
no longer recognized him.
A few short years ago they never would have dreamed of
attending such a lavish event, let alone be the A-list draw card, the guests of honor. As the star attraction, he was the reason so many had waited for hours
and now lined the barriers, for just a glimpse of his face. The thought was so
foreign as to be outlandish. His success
was well deserved though. While it seemed to outsiders to be a sudden stroke of
good fortune, a lucky dip on behalf of the producers, she knew better. She had
waited out the hours of practice he put in, poured over the research he had
done, knew intimately what he had sacrificed in pursuit of his, no their,
dream. When they had first met, she had seen this moment in him. She knew he
was something special, she could see it shining under his second-hand coat, his
drab, scuffed shoes, and his defeated demeanor. With her love, he had given up
giving up. His big ideas had become big dreams, big plans, big projects and finally
big successes (with a few minor setbacks along the way) And here now, this was his moment to shine.
The jewels on his mask refracted far from sight their struggles, their despair
of ever making it. The peacock feathers camouflaged those grey streaks that had
previously represented his every worry. A dollar that wasn’t made in time, a
phone call that wasn’t taken because the caller wouldn’t like the answer or a
meal that was skipped because he “wasn’t hungry”. And now his finery cost more
than they would have spent in a month.
The mask was straight from Venice, where they had just spent
a second honeymoon. They visited an exclusive Venetian mascherari, to handpick their masks; he was a much decorated previous winner
of la maschera più bella at the Carnival of Venice, and was both charming
and devious in his attention. The choices were endless and portrayed every
character and emotion that could be conceived of. It was a sweet shop of
identities. Pick a little bit of lust, a
sprinkle of desire, or a handful of fear and build your own persona. They spent
hours delighting in the almost grotesque experience before settling on the Columbina
masks they wore tonight. His was a treasure, black and heavily encrusted with
jewels, and cobalt blue and emerald feathers. Hers was a much simpler version
in traditional white, insignificant in comparison.
An evening gondola
ride on the Grand Canal had seemed so surreal, like a scene from the movies they
had watched together, snuggling in bed to avoid putting on the heater. And yet,
it was their life now. She couldn’t
quite believe it was here, finally theirs. The glint of success in his eyes so
long ago had come to fruition and was spread all over his face for all to see.
She had to share him now. With his fame, everyone had the right to know him, to
love him. She had lost a little bit of him, that secret that only she could
see. But had she? Or had the secret just changed? As he played to the camera, waving his mask
playfully, she could see the lines of his face, the effort required to be their
idol, the cost of the masterpiece created to fit others ideals. When once he
had masked his dreams and desires of success, now success was his new mask.
Only she knew the insecurities and base fears which resided deep within and
that would never really leave. She knew how fragile his extravagant plumage really
was.
Erin:
This
is a bird. The bird has a cool tail.
Read more about what inspired our "all the stories matter" collaborations in creative writing here and here.
Read more about what inspired our "all the stories matter" collaborations in creative writing here and here.
What do you think of our stories? Why not write one yourself inspired
by this picture and share your results with us here….
As it was my
daughter's writing that inspired me to put “pen to paper” (never so
figuratively as it has now become), I want to keep collaborating and sharing
our love of writing fiction.
So we have
decided to regularly write a creative short story based on the same
inspiration. Here is our next collaboration: Always the Same
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