Growth
Mummy:
The tears fell slowly and deliberately.
Drip. I hate
this.
Drip. I hate this.
Drip, Drip, Drip. Hate, hate hate.
The little girl was
overcome by the strength of her emotion, her body racked. How could they not
understand? Did they not see the fear? The narrowing of her pupils, the goose-pimples
on her skin. Still they sent her out here. They would not listen. Their eyes
glazed over dismissively when she tried to give voice to what lurked in the
dark, in the shadows.
The drips of her tears gained in volume as they mingled
with the water from the watering can.
Drip drop. I’m scared.
Drip drop. Why me?
Drip … the anticipation of a sound that never came.
The blackness soaked up the
sound as a sponge, acknowledging the arrival of something else. Something else
entirely. The chill set in from her toes and traveled agonizingly slowly up
her legs. Involuntary fear gripped her, quivering and shivering, always at her
back. With the lightest touch, their
breath made her tremble. Or was it the rhythmic, pulsing beating wings. She
felt every movement as a statue, unable to turn around or even take a breath.
The crawling legs magnified into multitudes. Their number or motive unknown,
left only to the limits of a imagination stretched by fear. They congregated
further, another then another. A clan, a pack a murder. She shuddered, unable
to raise her arms to break the spell and brush them away. But still she stood
strong, through willpower or lack of it, she wasn’t sure.
Sudden salvation! The garden was bathed in a brilliant
orange, her fears receded in an instant as an angel’s voice peeled out. The
wings dispersed beaten but still untamed. Their battle and hers done for today. “Dear, have you finished watering my tomatoes?
Thank you for doing your chores but come in for dinner, your father’s already
at the table and it's getting dark.” She put down the can, releasing her
whitened grip, gathered her dignity and walked towards the door. Slowly,
deliberately, one foot then the next. A little stronger, a little prouder, a little
taller. Head held high, deliberately resisting the urge to look back at her
tormentors. Only a slight rustling in the shadows gave any indication of their
presence, but she knew they were there, waiting, patient in her fear and
strength. Always at her back.
Erin (Age 5):
Story #1. This is a garden. The garden belongs to me. I love my garden.
Story #2. This is flowers. One flower is in a flower pot. It is beautiful.
Read more about what inspired our "all the stories matter" collaborations in creative writing here and here.
Story #1. This is a garden. The garden belongs to me. I love my garden.
Story #2. This is flowers. One flower is in a flower pot. It is beautiful.
Read more about what inspired our "all the stories matter" collaborations in creative writing here and here.
What do you think of our stories? Why not write one yourself based on this picture and share
your results with us here….
Lisa this is great. I am so jealous, I have never been a writer, so have never felt the frustration. Although I do admit to a Blog which rather fell by the wayside, when I had the accident. I wonder if you will inspire me to try again.
ReplyDeleteJo, you have so many wonderful stories to tell, you should give it a go! I'm finding it very therapeutic.
DeleteThis is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kylie!
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